tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7245293878341271115.post2544473241234025376..comments2023-11-03T04:24:05.324-07:00Comments on A Dwelling by The Sea: Making lists...Kathy Reedhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12326495504453579091noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7245293878341271115.post-31944775138901431842014-10-24T19:57:16.184-07:002014-10-24T19:57:16.184-07:00..there was at one time...I changed the line for t.....there was at one time...I changed the line for the better I think ..thanks..Kathy Reedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12326495504453579091noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7245293878341271115.post-14348820831509112252014-10-24T19:44:15.778-07:002014-10-24T19:44:15.778-07:00I love the fifth stanza, & yes, you flat rocke...I love the fifth stanza, & yes, you flat rocked the prompt & did it in a form corset while rhyming; quite the accomplishment. Most of my lists are check list on how to remember computer techniques or new expansion of my rigid Luddite-like mind. Wow, in 1954, when I was ten, what I could have done with the internet & an iMac. Glenn Buttkushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10680725814199700692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7245293878341271115.post-47350662596736053852014-10-24T19:34:55.635-07:002014-10-24T19:34:55.635-07:00prioritize and control....hmmm...is someone a cont...prioritize and control....hmmm...is someone a control freak in your life?<br /><br /><a href="https://zongrik.wordpress.com/2014/10/24/hurricane-and-jordan-white-house-protectors/" rel="nofollow">hurricane and jordan</a>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7245293878341271115.post-71119339167024820182014-10-24T18:53:36.145-07:002014-10-24T18:53:36.145-07:00"exorcise from within what has saddened"..."exorcise from within what has saddened"<br /><br />I love that line. That is a big reason why I wrote as well.Justin Lambhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04540827237593614818noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7245293878341271115.post-89419668847221117122014-10-24T18:04:55.007-07:002014-10-24T18:04:55.007-07:00The villanelle seems to suit the subject beautiful...The villanelle seems to suit the subject beautifully! :)Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7245293878341271115.post-40624877056650103422014-10-24T13:27:00.056-07:002014-10-24T13:27:00.056-07:00Ah there are so many lists that I wish to make - a...Ah there are so many lists that I wish to make - and they never happen. I wish I could write daily too....that never happens. Mon.Esprithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11348192101465775124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7245293878341271115.post-83086927973733385372014-10-24T09:48:14.190-07:002014-10-24T09:48:14.190-07:00How witty to write a list of lists. Love the line ...How witty to write a list of lists. Love the line "Writing daily is easing for one's soul " - feel the same. Not always ready to publish, post, but I keep writing dayly...~ Thankshumbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7245293878341271115.post-76915051254117016002014-10-24T09:04:56.025-07:002014-10-24T09:04:56.025-07:00"For all the bounty, how empty our bowl"..."For all the bounty, how empty our bowl" gem of a line...Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7245293878341271115.post-76703564023372628952014-10-24T08:25:13.068-07:002014-10-24T08:25:13.068-07:00I was struck by the line about being abandoned. M...I was struck by the line about being abandoned. Made me think of how much I journaled when my daughter was a teen, getting ready to leave me to explore her life. I wrote daily then. Now, almost daily and yes, it helps everything.Myrna R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/15088915165678737118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7245293878341271115.post-59971048582120831012014-10-24T07:06:29.140-07:002014-10-24T07:06:29.140-07:00i have to admit that i don't write daily - but...i have to admit that i don't write daily - but i know it helps a lot - i should - the vilanelle works well with the list theme - wouldn't have thought of it - really coolClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7245293878341271115.post-22800770284105736022014-10-24T00:35:03.486-07:002014-10-24T00:35:03.486-07:00Oh Kathy, that couplet is sublime - and so true. I...Oh Kathy, that couplet is sublime - and so true. I've never yet managed to discipline myself to write every day; it's something I'll have to try again.<br /><br />T.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7245293878341271115.post-1764975491103594582014-10-23T23:38:43.301-07:002014-10-23T23:38:43.301-07:00Very true lines.Very true lines.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7245293878341271115.post-45208245959887121672014-10-23T21:17:16.194-07:002014-10-23T21:17:16.194-07:00And filling the bowl is exactly what we need.. Tha...And filling the bowl is exactly what we need.. That line about him leaving sticks out in contrast here.. Great work.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7245293878341271115.post-7452145690905396552014-10-23T21:15:47.628-07:002014-10-23T21:15:47.628-07:00How true.. That daily writing is an exercise worth...How true.. That daily writing is an exercise worth doing, an exercise to do... brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7245293878341271115.post-8491740039224951602014-10-23T18:57:30.295-07:002014-10-23T18:57:30.295-07:00Yes writing everyday is a must ~ And making a list...Yes writing everyday is a must ~ And making a list to keep things running smoothly ~ And I admire the villanelle structure very much ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7245293878341271115.post-62465136470824617252014-10-23T18:18:29.235-07:002014-10-23T18:18:29.235-07:00I think you should plan to blog until at LEAST 104...I think you should plan to blog until at LEAST 104. I think it keeps a person's mind alert, and we all know how important that is. I do like the idea of writing something daily....either for enjoyment or to make lists to plan with. Writing helps the mind to continue to be alert and refreshed, I think.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7245293878341271115.post-4195850784213741722014-10-23T16:56:34.861-07:002014-10-23T16:56:34.861-07:00i am all for writing daily...lists though are my w...i am all for writing daily...lists though are my wife's thing...lol...<br />it is nice to look back and see what you accomplished though in a day...<br />like how you used emptying our bowl....Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com