tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7245293878341271115.post8283918144226766948..comments2023-11-03T04:24:05.324-07:00Comments on A Dwelling by The Sea: Traveling with doves..Kathy Reedhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12326495504453579091noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7245293878341271115.post-63849204227490985692014-08-03T06:49:58.247-07:002014-08-03T06:49:58.247-07:00I am sorry, Kathy, but doves and morning dew have ...I am sorry, Kathy, but doves and morning dew have no place at the sea. One wonders if you are serious, or if you are just making fun of the art of poetry.Vacciniushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03631121664181976045noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7245293878341271115.post-18904720820374263752014-08-01T20:05:02.667-07:002014-08-01T20:05:02.667-07:00wow! wonderfully crafted. each stanza is lovely,...wow! wonderfully crafted. each stanza is lovely, but there is something about the first I particularly liked.RMPhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04054771419356465116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7245293878341271115.post-75688231809164788132014-08-01T19:19:34.069-07:002014-08-01T19:19:34.069-07:00Wonderful offering Katy! A smooth venturing out wi...Wonderful offering Katy! A smooth venturing out with love as a support! Great write!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7245293878341271115.post-45338601493222185922014-08-01T12:49:56.751-07:002014-08-01T12:49:56.751-07:00Amazing. You wrote something beautiful in spite o...Amazing. You wrote something beautiful in spite of the absurd restrictions. You're a master.Myrna R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/15088915165678737118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7245293878341271115.post-77270743504522755772014-08-01T11:46:50.716-07:002014-08-01T11:46:50.716-07:00I am so in love with this poem - beautifully done ...I am so in love with this poem - beautifully done - KAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7245293878341271115.post-24478048410247916052014-08-01T10:17:46.212-07:002014-08-01T10:17:46.212-07:00traveling with white doves from dawn till dusk... ...traveling with white doves from dawn till dusk... how awesome would that be...love the tender voice in this katy...Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7245293878341271115.post-86657615244495939102014-08-01T03:17:50.419-07:002014-08-01T03:17:50.419-07:00Romantic and poignant - lovely response to the pro...Romantic and poignant - lovely response to the prompt.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7245293878341271115.post-14962305084089049372014-08-01T02:10:49.055-07:002014-08-01T02:10:49.055-07:00Lovely poem Katy, so well done.Lovely poem Katy, so well done.Michaelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07512953735819338268noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7245293878341271115.post-65103596996704848522014-08-01T01:38:38.714-07:002014-08-01T01:38:38.714-07:00Very romantic, and you managed this form beautiful...Very romantic, and you managed this form beautifully.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7245293878341271115.post-49859721604410806062014-08-01T01:24:39.921-07:002014-08-01T01:24:39.921-07:00Beautiful Katy.!Beautiful Katy.!Cressida de Novahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08781684841036567770noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7245293878341271115.post-51137304057204846222014-07-31T20:00:00.977-07:002014-07-31T20:00:00.977-07:00The poem has a soft lilting effect and moves grace...The poem has a soft lilting effect and moves gracefully breathing peace...beautifully spun...Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7245293878341271115.post-3500372396333454342014-07-31T15:43:56.997-07:002014-07-31T15:43:56.997-07:00this was so elegant... it was more like a gentle e...this was so elegant... it was more like a gentle echo... lovelyWolfsrosebudhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17295258422523621134noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7245293878341271115.post-34745919672647333182014-07-31T15:19:58.654-07:002014-07-31T15:19:58.654-07:00This is a beautiful and gentle and dreamlike poem,...This is a beautiful and gentle and dreamlike poem, Kathy. You worked the form very well.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7245293878341271115.post-18753772567162969822014-07-31T15:04:36.653-07:002014-07-31T15:04:36.653-07:00This is incredibly beautiful, with the doves, the...This is incredibly beautiful, with the doves, the midnight blue and the loved one's presence on the morning dew.......Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7245293878341271115.post-30640359606295202462014-07-31T15:02:30.130-07:002014-07-31T15:02:30.130-07:00This is a very romantic take on the prompt, Katy! ...This is a very romantic take on the prompt, Katy! "Falling stars spell your name in midnight blue" - my favorite line in your poem along with the closing line. Gabriellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09968615376035959259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7245293878341271115.post-81126660354097451962014-07-31T14:22:48.156-07:002014-07-31T14:22:48.156-07:00Such a romantic; makes me wish my wife was not out...Such a romantic; makes me wish my wife was not out of town. You rocked the form, & gave it a Lord Byron twist; very nicely done, K. I like the line /your name I spell in the falling morning dew/.Glenn Buttkushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10680725814199700692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7245293878341271115.post-47268647196909832432014-07-31T14:18:16.332-07:002014-07-31T14:18:16.332-07:00This was so coherent...did you write the last stan...This was so coherent...did you write the last stanza first? A great love poem!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7245293878341271115.post-59938044996024339412014-07-31T13:11:29.511-07:002014-07-31T13:11:29.511-07:00oh some cool magic touches...the falling stars spe...oh some cool magic touches...the falling stars spelling the name in the heavens is cool...and you spelling it in the morning dew...think are my favs....i like the 5/6 lines in the opening as well...the kiss sailing on to them...and nice job on the last stanza too, not a awkward word placement at all...very cool kathyBrian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7245293878341271115.post-75525218911748170542014-07-31T13:07:28.529-07:002014-07-31T13:07:28.529-07:00This was a sweet rendering of the love poem.. I lo...This was a sweet rendering of the love poem.. I love the last stanza.. You got it so well together brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.com