tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7245293878341271115.post8891461256517140060..comments2023-11-03T04:24:05.324-07:00Comments on A Dwelling by The Sea: The vagabond's song...Kathy Reedhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12326495504453579091noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7245293878341271115.post-17465187444966624182012-10-28T05:14:09.980-07:002012-10-28T05:14:09.980-07:00..relief that it works..thanks....relief that it works..thanks..Kathy Reedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12326495504453579091noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7245293878341271115.post-45523576460967635532012-10-28T05:13:04.776-07:002012-10-28T05:13:04.776-07:00..yes;0, thanks....yes;0, thanks..Kathy Reedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12326495504453579091noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7245293878341271115.post-35435868205472829272012-10-28T05:12:32.246-07:002012-10-28T05:12:32.246-07:00..glad you liked it..thanks..glad you liked it..thanksKathy Reedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12326495504453579091noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7245293878341271115.post-24689701819802030302012-10-28T05:11:19.787-07:002012-10-28T05:11:19.787-07:00that's good, right?;)that's good, right?;)Kathy Reedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12326495504453579091noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7245293878341271115.post-90796625578270673512012-10-26T23:05:19.043-07:002012-10-26T23:05:19.043-07:00This poem harkens back to the origins of the villa...This poem harkens back to the origins of the villanelle as a "song of the village", a troubador's song, and lends its meandering rhythm to the journey described. Semaphorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16945917520773585129noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7245293878341271115.post-37093375064670775522012-10-26T22:30:14.052-07:002012-10-26T22:30:14.052-07:00Lovely and lyrical, strange and mythic - truth too...Lovely and lyrical, strange and mythic - truth too repeats in stanzas - the human spirit long to follow the unknown paths and yearns for home. Well said, artfully constructed!Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7245293878341271115.post-68242762129980561402012-10-26T20:45:59.079-07:002012-10-26T20:45:59.079-07:00You captured the conflicted heart here very well. ...You captured the conflicted heart here very well. The nostalgia and wanderlust both competing, which seems psychologically quite real. K.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7245293878341271115.post-57038801701684220632012-10-26T19:40:45.012-07:002012-10-26T19:40:45.012-07:00oh that vagabond song...think i can sing it as wel...oh that vagabond song...think i can sing it as well...but then...no place like home, right...? being 4 weeks away from my fam right now...and yeah...missing them...Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7245293878341271115.post-32054408698120236072012-10-26T10:42:22.278-07:002012-10-26T10:42:22.278-07:00smiles...very nice....the road has a tight call on...smiles...very nice....the road has a tight call on me at times....and that makes for a nice contrast to home....i got my chance to go home though....smiles....nice on the form...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7245293878341271115.post-50130718927679626902012-10-26T10:41:00.057-07:002012-10-26T10:41:00.057-07:00I too would now like to try this poetic form ... y...I too would now like to try this poetic form ... your work really inspired me !!!Amrit Sinhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08333443172096537424noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7245293878341271115.post-31741094117892652722012-10-26T08:45:08.797-07:002012-10-26T08:45:08.797-07:00An interesting use of the form, with an asymmetric...An interesting use of the form, with an asymmetric feel, despite the repeating lines. The labyrinth does have a powerful call.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.com