Wednesday, May 23, 2012

Driftwood ...Haiku Wednesday...

Haiku Wednesday

 Heart turned to driftwood
closed to another's soft touch
Could this be the time?

Could this be the time
for the drifter to appear?
Hat hung by the door

Hat hung by the door
frozen shut by drifts of snow
unlike summer's balm

Unlike summers' balm
 when boats drift simmering shores
Fireworks burst at dusk

Fireworks burst at dusk
Do stay, if you get my drift
Heart turned to driftwood


by klr
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9 comments:

  1. LincMay 23, 2012 at 5:43 AM

    Oh wow, this is deep and filling and beautiful. That first/last line says so much. Thank you.

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  2. Tara TylerMay 23, 2012 at 6:00 AM

    love your connected haiku! perfect for approaching summer!

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  3. carol l mckennaMay 23, 2012 at 9:37 AM

    excellent ~ beautiful cascading haiku ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  4. TeresaMay 23, 2012 at 1:23 PM

    These are all so wonderful, and they do connect perfectly.

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  5. Ms. BeckyMay 23, 2012 at 4:44 PM

    It's a beautiful dance, I love it. the way it twists and turns and still flows. nicely done.

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  6. MijayamiMay 23, 2012 at 8:32 PM

    Love the flow from one to the next. Well done!

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  7. Lisa GordonMay 24, 2012 at 8:23 AM

    I love this haiku, and what a beautiful photograph.
    Such wonderful soft tones.

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  8. AnonymousMay 24, 2012 at 12:19 PM

    Nice cascading Haiku ... I love driftwood and all its personalities!
    Lazy and Drifting

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  9. JustineMay 25, 2012 at 2:26 AM

    how lovely!

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