by klr
Water runs clear in the creek bed;
streaming moss grasps its hard pulled roots
Smooth mottled rocks look back at me,
gold tones hit thigh high wading boots
Light plays into stained glass ripples;
Shades of evening gather and turn
still pools to aubergine ink wells
Gone is midday's white brittle fern
And all fools wish to love again;
when all is said and done and fish
when all is said and done and fish
swim no longer in murky dens,
but frolic with faces clownish
Rising, flying to halfway heights
between the green sea and blue sky
Lofty hymns, pianissimo -
air and gulls' wings thus carried by
Heard only by the steadfast ear
they recall a sailor's lost joys,
they recall a sailor's lost joys,
tribulation's lost salty tears
preserving crimped hearts as alloys
Flutters of wishes unfolding
fragile spirits lift sacredly
fragile spirits lift sacredly
and in the throws of leaving cry
the clouds for birds nigh achingly
Beating still louder, red gold wings,
flocks of one million butterflies -
flocks of one million butterflies -
What was a lifetime of verses
disappears bidding it's goodbye's
Over at dversepoets.com Claudia has invited us to share our version of a mirage or heat wave, a kind of fantasy about real and the unreal...I had this already half written, although it doesn't suggest "hot", just that fine line between our visual and imagined horizons...and will be reading all the other posts tonight after dinner out.
ah you got me...smiles...this is lovely...all fools wish to love again ...smiles...call me a fool...i wanna love and not say goodbye, even if it stills 1000 butterflies...smiles...really a moving piece...
ReplyDelete..glad you liked it.
DeleteOh, those flutters of wishes unfolding...and then a lifetime of verses disappearing. A beautiful summer poem, Katy.
ReplyDeleteI like that you call it a 'summer poem' ..I think I will give it a new title ;) Thanks Mary
DeleteThis is so melodic and flowing -- beautiful! It almost feels like riding on small gentle waves in the sea.
ReplyDelete...that's how I was feeling when I wrote it..moving on in a way..
DeleteThis was a beautiful write. I could feel the flutters of wishes.
ReplyDeletesometimes they feel just like that...and then they subside..thank you
DeleteVery dreamy--"a life time of verses . . . " left me a bit teary.
ReplyDelete..it's how I was feeling as well ;)
DeleteTHi is great kkkaty. Surreal almost
ReplyDeleteThank you...not understood perhaps but it comes from somewhere ;_) thanks.
Deleteoh i just love the images...the blend and the butterflies..lifetime of verse...the all fools wanting to love..yeah... it's wonderfully dreamy k.
ReplyDeletethank you claudia...how the horizon looks to me and what's in that mirage is sometimes hard to tell ;)
DeleteA wonderful write that drifts from melancholy to fantastical then back again. Very nice write!
ReplyDeleteThank you very much!
DeleteDreamy and nice.. with the ferns and the butterflies... Lovely
ReplyDeleteThanks, Bjorn
Deleteso very lovely... the 3rd stanza stood out to me - beautiful imagery throughout. love where you take my mind - thank you for the journey...
ReplyDelete~Miriam
..glad you liked it..thank you
DeleteThis is lovely, certainly has that mirage quality. I almost felt I was flying with the butterflies:)
ReplyDeleteI think the photo helps with the mirage quality...thank you
DeleteCalming, soothing, wistful. I love your line stops - they make me read the poem in two very different ways.
ReplyDelete...me too....thanks for stopping by Marina
DeleteGorgeous natural details all hinging on the fools who wish to love again.. that makes for a lovely read.
ReplyDelete...even if we don't love another again nature carries us through ..beyond the blue horizon..
Deletevivid, seductive. Enjoyed.
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteFor me it is difficult to grasp what you mean. The poem seems to be a condemnation of foolishness, but it is not clear. I find the pictures to many and confusing. But I love the rhymes.
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....it's a testament of sorts of how beautiful life can be; it means when it comes to love we are easily enchanted...but its about how I look at life now at my age, going on 67, and what makes me most happy and wistful, where I've been and where I am going.. thanks, Anders.
Deletethis is really beautiful, and I'm appropriating Claudia's word of the year and going to say it's dreamy. -Mike
ReplyDelete...and a good word it is! Thank you..
DeleteThis is so beautiful and dreamy. Made me really see the horizon. What a good write.
ReplyDeleteI appreciate that Myrna; it helps to take a break, you know, from writing and put energy into something else for awhile... ;)
ReplyDeleteLovely, musical writing.
ReplyDelete"And all fools wish to love again;
ReplyDeletewhen all is said and done and fish
swim no longer in murky dens,
but frolic with faces clownish"
Loved the visuals this brought to mind
you are the only one who specifically mentioned that stanza...I think it was lost on some ;) thanx
Deletei love how flowy this is, beautiful.
ReplyDeletelove the interaction of the piece... made it personal
ReplyDeletecame back to read again
DeleteI'm glad you got something from this...it was personal for me as well ;)
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