no more pulled covers over her head
while she sleeps,
while she sleeps,
as Kingdoms transition and fall -
even under the most
abiding skies...
abiding skies...
The good ship "false hope"
steams across safe harbor's bay;
mirages of new truths appear
o'er jeweled seas of
love and trust,
where gossamer fork-tongued
bridges span years of time.
Ninety degrees west of there -
floating colors in hula hand waves,
pinwheels of childhood,
and farther still, shorelines
that embroider her name - places like
pinwheels of childhood,
and farther still, shorelines
that embroider her name - places like
Spain and Djibouti
Upon awakening she turns and
looks from whence
she once came
looks from whence
she once came
and stares at the world anew,
sees things no longer are the same;
finding wars she did not expect,
lies she lived in others' eyes -
feeling betrayed
Roses bearing full weight
of droplets held that wait to
be cried down again,
be cried down again,
washing away her signature
from the sands of time,
freeing her soul
from pain
This was a fun exercise as Claudia today asked us to write about one of the paintings by Judith Clay. Both are from Germany and we see the fairy tale and whimsical traits they both have in their respective talents. Read more over at dversepoets.com
from pain
This was a fun exercise as Claudia today asked us to write about one of the paintings by Judith Clay. Both are from Germany and we see the fairy tale and whimsical traits they both have in their respective talents. Read more over at dversepoets.com
The good ship "false hope"
ReplyDeletesteams across safe harbor's bay;
mirages of new truths appear
o'er jeweled seas of
love and trust...ha...love that...you def have to watch those fork tongue bridges as well....and i wonder how many would say they did not expect all that...
and the middle schooler trapped inside me loves to say djibouti...hahaha
Good question Brian! I'm glad you liked it...and I love to pronounce the word Djibouti also!
ReplyDeleteyou pack a lot into this...the unrealized dreams... the false hope ship... the mix of dream and reality and how life takes us along unexpected roads sometimes... yet in all there's a peacefulness... this is one of my fav pics by her as well
ReplyDeleteOh I love this picture, what a wonderful poem you wrote for it...So much in it but yet it still holds that dream like feeling...a great combination.
ReplyDeletewashing away her signature
ReplyDeletefrom the sands of time,
freeing her soul
from pain
There is a finality bringing relief of wanting to be free to a close! Nicely Katy!
Hank
"The good ship "false hope" : steams across safe harbor's bay;" Two of many lovely lines Katy!
ReplyDeleteIt's a great dream, of life and love. Maybe she will get over disappointment and live her dreams someday. Good writing
ReplyDeleteI too was going to mention that good ship 'false hope.' Much different than the Good Ship Lollipop, I think. Enjoyed the progression in this poem and that at the end the soul is freed from pain.
ReplyDeleteI love the transition from sleeping to awakening ~ Some things may be the same but we see them with new eyes and hopefully brings her away from pain ~
ReplyDeleteOh if the blessed dreams were true... but at least we live in the middle between those gilded dreams and the monsters of nightmare.
ReplyDelete"Upon awakening she turns and
ReplyDeletelooks from whence
she once came
She stares at the world anew,
sees things no longer are the same;"
Love this! Amazing job and so soul engaging...really enjoyed!
You've done such a good job of depicting that feeling of hopelessness that seems to weave its way into our lives at time. "The good ship 'false hope'--an apt description of it. I often feel like avoiding the news, yet we have a responsibility to know what's going on, even if much of the time we are powerless to do much other than pray. And vote.
ReplyDelete....good for her... to take the courage to free herself... it's not an easy thing to do .... but once done the sky is yours to carry your wide spanning wings --- bolder & ready to love again... smiles... loved this....
ReplyDeletelove the "gossamer forked-tongued bridges" Beautiful poem!
ReplyDeleteSo talented! Your blog looks great!
ReplyDeleteNice to see you Rosemary ;) thank you.
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