At dversepoets.com today we are writing an Alouette.....two or more stanzas of 6 lines each, with the following set rules: Meter: 5, 5, 7, 5, 5, 7 Rhyme Scheme: a, a, b, c, c, b
Skylarks After the Storm
Morningsong delight
for Isle of the Right;
trumpets' troubled notes of rain
led by a drumline
marching out of time,
flying above the terrain
Lightning edges flash
Lightning edges flash
blink of an eyelash
Waterfalls beckon the flock
to bathe in the sun
The war must be won
before one man stops the clock
Miniature kites
larks pirouette 'round corners
spreading their goodwill
throughout vale and hill,
messaging beyond borders
Harbingers of peace
warn wars meant to cease
The world has been mismanaged
Fire spits from within
to mend what's fallen,
gold leaf to fill cracks damaged
Resolve unsurpassed,
each man and each lass -
heed the call to assemble
Gentler leadership
greater fellowhip,
gleaned when earth Tuesay trembled
Oh gosh, what beautiful words to soothe our sad souls, Kathy, and a wonderful alouette. This is the path that I'm going to follow...that one of believing in goodness, light and love. Of course we still have these things! I so appreciate your positive poem in light of Tuesday's trembling. xo
ReplyDeleteI love the image of those miniature kites tumbling from the sky!
ReplyDeleteI love how you take us to the gentler side... wonderful truly wonderful
ReplyDeleteSounds so peaceful and pretty, with skylarks flying high,spreading goodwill! :)
ReplyDeleteThis is so lyrical and lovely. And with a lovely message.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed this so much, it does have a lyrical feel.
ReplyDeleteInteresting comment on the aftermath of the US election, if I understood it correctly.
ReplyDeleteThe calm after the storm in this case.
ReplyDeleteLovely lyrical weaving to this.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful, peaceful, and soothing... hopefully we can all heed your words and mend.
ReplyDeleteLove the image of "harbingers of peace."
ReplyDeleteLove the flow of this beautiful poem, and especially that last line.
ReplyDeleteA stunning write, providing comfort in the aftermath. Beautiful in imagery. I especially like
ReplyDelete"Miniature kites
tumble from the sky,
larks pirouette 'round corners"
spreading their goodwill
ReplyDeletethroughout vale and hill,
messaging beyond borders
Skylarks have a way of reaching out spreading the messages of peace
Hank
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I love the message of love and peace after that elections Katy ~ Let us indeed spread the messag of goodwill ~
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