Thursday, December 29, 2011

Haiku Wednesday word prompt: Review...



haiku-wednesday


Accept the Invitation: The Year in Review
by klr 

Cedar tips fill out
A warming gale blows leeward
Winter in our eyes

Let open the door, 
open the eastern window
Accept the invitation

We sing parting songs,
reviewing the best and worst
The pendulum shifts

There are no bookends
on the shelf of life and time,
only knowledge gained

To live simply and earthly, 
with passion to give, 
share, build, salvage, and renew





























6 comments:

  1. Thanks for joining us at Sensational Haiku Wednesday this year - Happy New Year!

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  2. i like the fourth one a lot

    happy new year

    Five Senryu of Review

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  3. hi sweetie :) wishing you a wonderful 2012 too. xxo

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  4. these are wonderful - I love the second and fourth especially. wishing you all the best in 2012. cheers!

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  5. Bookends of life - like than one. Good job on all of them. Nanc

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  6. wow! they are all amazing, but I like the fourth one the best. your view on reviewing life is very deep. thank you for stopping by to my blog too last month. sorry it's been taking me this long to return the visit, which i am very glad that i did that. lovely work you've done here. happy new year to you and i'm sure this year will bring this blog more visits and success. ~Olive Tree.

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