She bakes a wild salmon souffle'
to astound her distinguished peer -
guest of all guests: King Zabineer
Troubadours serenade all day,
dancers Petra and Electra
portray their best kama sutra
Standing on their heads, little sway
blood rushes to their fair faces
while they stare at the King's laces
Serving the meal was her valet
wearing tights and plume d' egret
- mixed greens with an oil Vinaigrette
Crackers, caviar on the way,
fresh raised snails munch on their own terms;
lest we forget compost with worms
Festivities well underway
locally grown cherries did flirt
with almonds in a crepe dessert
the king made away with Petra
madame's face: quite the fenestra
Trying my hand at a form I picked up on one of our blogger's posts called The Constanza, which consists of five or more 3-line stanzas. Each line has a set meter of eight syllables. The first lines of all the stanzas can be read successively as a poem. The first lines convey a theme written in monorhyme, while the second and third lines of each stanza rhyme together. Rhyme scheme: a/b/b, a/c/c, a/d/d, a/e/e, a/f/f………etc. Those in the know please feel free to correct me if I'm wrong about this. dversepoets.com
ha...love the dance in your words...and the dessert sounds wonderful...i laughed at looking at the kings laces as well...lol fun piece...
ReplyDeleteThe rhyme and rhythm in this structure perfectly complements the humor you've unearthed in this tapestry of stories. Well done!
ReplyDeleteI appreciate that very much
DeleteIm no expert, but it appears to me you nailed the form, and did so quite beautifully. Rythm and rhyme are exceptional! I LIKE it!
ReplyDeleteI'm glad!
DeleteA constanza - I'll have to remember that. Really interesting. Nice movement with lightness to it. Servers wearing tights and plume d'egret. Well, alright then.
ReplyDeleteThank you..a bit risque perhaps; I surprise myself
Deletenice. a new form to mull over to boot. Really nice tone here and lost of neat use of action, detail and levity as well. Nicely done. thanks
ReplyDeleteThank you, Fred.
Deletehaha...cool on the .. locally grown cherries flirting
ReplyDeletewith almonds in a crepe dessert......smiles...really like where the prompt took you
Thank you Claudia
DeleteYou have done a beautiful job not just with the form and rhyme but in creating an amazing atmosphere this is wonderful =)
ReplyDeleteThank you ..actually the form is easy..the atmosphere a challenge ;)
DeleteHave never heard of this form... there are so many out there...but love the quick pace of this...and really loved this stanza...
ReplyDeleteFestivities well underway
locally grown cherries did flirt
with almonds in a crepe dessert
local girls always like to flirt lovely light write!
racier than I intended ;)
Delete...consistent diction --- loved it! the form itself & your tale fits good together and are completely fascinating... smiles... enjoyed it!
ReplyDeleteA lovely form and a delicious meal.. love it.
ReplyDeleteVery lovely form and rhyming pattern~
ReplyDeleteI specially like this - delicious :
Festivities well underway
locally grown cherries did flirt
with almonds in a crepe dessert
Thanks, Grace
DeleteI'm enjoying the european smorgasbord. clever turns and , though the form is new to me, you've done splendidly with the flow of words. kama sutra, headstands--fantastic visuals.
ReplyDeleteI'm glad you stopped by..thanks, Jane.
Deletethe above comment was me, Katy. I've been unable to post from wordpress and am trying to figure it out. ~Jane
ReplyDeleteDelicious :)
ReplyDeleteI like your write. It was fun to read!
ReplyDeleteSuper clever - lots of flavor here - I am most intrigued by the Kama Sutra on the head! Crazy, but much fun! k.
ReplyDeleteWonderful! both the form and content!
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