Victoria over at dversepoets.com suggests we write in the poetic form of "Synesthesia". If you have ever given a voice or color to an emotion or thing, this is an opportunity to imagination what you might write and give it a try. Check out what others have written today.
Shavings of sherbet served
in morning clouds
play in squinting stained glass
sail boat skies
Markets below sell wares, fruit
cakes, freshly brewed art for the soul
Gold leaf ladders lean against
invisible walls as I gleefully
slide down a long curving chute,
land on polar bear soft,
billowy white drifts of linen,
scents of pine and tart mulberry _
Strings of colored lights adorn each door;
there stands a thin fiddler playing his lute
for wars no more
I grab a fir tree swag, swing high above
on an aerial merry-go-round_
all around town
My hair screams, hints of the midway,
life kaleidoscoping by
There, in a treetop of mint frosting,
I sit with an angel
at the break of day
Trees bow low in meditation
as I breeze through them on my way
Heavenly birdsong ties with ribbon
red bows to pin to my heart;
The sea is fully dressed in tinsel
I sit with an angel
at the break of day
Trees bow low in meditation
as I breeze through them on my way
Heavenly birdsong ties with ribbon
red bows to pin to my heart;
The sea is fully dressed in tinsel
Then with the stealth of a doe,
I weave textures of nature into
holiday mittens, frozen memories
of chunks of coal,
gingerbread images
of red-cheeked children,
in tweed hats, cookie size wide-eyed
gingerbread images
of red-cheeked children,
in tweed hats, cookie size wide-eyed
Holiday bustle meets ancient shamans
pedalling oils of penitence
"we are all brethren",
say Myrrh and Frankincense
"we are all brethren",
say Myrrh and Frankincense
And when it snows,
the bitter taste of foes
and woes of yesteryear melt away,
the bitter taste of foes
and woes of yesteryear melt away,
leaving us perched on a mountain
of purple heather,
overlooking a valley of rugged
cobblestone where gumdrop
toadstools grow
and say,"this is home."
We are all in this together.
of purple heather,
overlooking a valley of rugged
cobblestone where gumdrop
toadstools grow
and say,"this is home."
We are all in this together.
This is a lovely Christmas story and just apt for the season ~ This is my favorite part:
ReplyDeleteThe sea is fully dressed in tinsel
Then with the stealth of a doe,
I weave textures of nature into
holiday mittens, frozen memories
Thanks for linking up Kathy and wishing you happy weekend ~
Grace
Thank you Grace...tinsel doesn't need adjectives ;)
DeleteThis is exactly how we want a perfect Christmas to be.. all white tinsel and the joy...I could almost hear the smells :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Bjorn.
DeleteWhat a feast! Lovely. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you.
DeleteThis is breathtakingly beautiful and is so filled with every sense. It's a wonderland of Christmas bounty and what is important in the season. Just lovely...
ReplyDeleteIt started being about the emptiness of the holidays..go figure. Thank you.
Deletethere is so much in this beautiful poem. I can see you took time observing, imagining and choosing just the perfect sensory description for this prompt. I just loved it.
ReplyDeleteIt's true, a lot of thought went into it, Victoria, thank you.
DeleteOh, Kathy. it's so nice to be reading & reconnecting with you; this beautiful flow of the holiday senses, smitten with synesthesia, feels epic within its richness & super-sensuality. A second reading reveals that the form gives it a epic feel, but that the words were actually sparse & carefully crafted; a cornucopia of kudos need to nestle in your lap; a remarkable tremendous piece of stunning poetics; my fave out on the trail for this prompt ( & there have been a lot of good ones). I like the lines /land on billowy/white drifts of linen/ & /where a thin fiddler plays his lute/ for wars no more/ & of course those /gumdrop toadstools/; holiday hugs.
ReplyDeleteWhy thank you, Glenn. You are too kind. Hopefully there will be a few more prompts before Christmas, but just in case, a holiday salute right back to you! ;)
Deletei suppose.. for our distant ancestors
ReplyDeleteliving in snow.. then
Christmas everynow
is just a hug
and
warm..
and perhaps
a fire for food..
and light for
dance
of night...
oh..
a simple
Christmas
spells H
U G S..:)