Happy New Year all! It is a new beginning for d'Verse Poets and out first prompt is offered by Kelly. It is to write about scents that linger.
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Honeysuckle roots,
milked oxygen from rich soil,
nursed by a willow
tree nearby, gave birth to blooms,
exhaled rose-scented fragrance
Recall a corsage,
shadowed petals pink and white,
opened by sweet youth,
heaven's nectar to seduce
bees and buoyant hummingbirds
Mmmm, I can smell it, you made me long for open windows and breezes on my toes. A lovely break on a cold, cold day.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Kelly.
Deletecool mix of poetic images around the same flower
ReplyDeleteI like how the Honeysuckle vine was nursed by the Willow tree...beautiful images in these two verses. This took me back to the one and only time I ever wore a corsage...to prom with a boyfriend.
ReplyDeleteI really love the smell of honeysuckle - it's all the good of early summer nights to me.
ReplyDeleteAaaah, how lovely - we had a honeysuckle in the back garden, scenting all the barbecue parties, driving people a bit drunk, like the Lotus-Eaters in the Odyssey, I always thought. It's an addictive smell, perhaps because we do associate it with the taste of honey.
ReplyDeleteLove this - especially "heaven's nectar to seduce bees and buoyant hummingbirds."
ReplyDeleteBeautifully put :D
Lots of love,
Sanaa
As I understand it, there are several varieties of honeysuckle, some like miniature roses, vines, bushes. I wonder if their scent varies, or does the pleasant sweet odor seem similar? Just wondering. You rocked the prompt in short order; first thought these stanzas were tanka.
ReplyDeleteI thought I was writing tanka...it doesn't qualify?;)
DeleteI'm quite sure the fragrances vary, but the most common here is very strong and sweet.
DeleteAh, what a lovely scent you have described SO well.
ReplyDeleteI just love that smell of honeysuckle and corsage so freshly plucked from the garden ~ I am now looking forward to spring season ~
ReplyDeleteBeautiful set of images. They transported me to a shiny spring day.
ReplyDeleteFloWers
ReplyDelete'round.. smell
pure and clean..
many dreams
so trUe
and fAir..
aWay froM
spOils.. dArk
smeLLs faDe oFF..:)
Wonderful images - coherent beauty.
ReplyDeleteGorgeous and summery - specially in this wintry season
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