Tuesday, June 20, 2017

Peppermint oil on my temples..




















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dversepoets.com  Quadrille #35


PEPPERMINT OIL ON MY TEMPLES

....awakening in
meadow yellow green,
lavender floral notes astound
Time sweetens memories;
my soul, rooted to the ground
Peppermint oil on
my temples
cools my mind;
love is soft, and when he
comes along, he will
taste like the poetry I
wish to write



15 comments:

  1. Wow! A lover who tastes like poetry. Gorgeous!

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  2. This takes my breath away:
    love is soft, and when he
    comes along, he will
    taste like the poetry I
    wish to write

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  3. very well crafted! you showed the emotions most people end up telling; far more effective!

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  4. "love is soft, and when he comes along, he will taste like the poetry I wish to write"... gorgeous, gorgeous, gorgeous write!!❤️

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  5. Oh I would love a taste like that... not strange that you need peppermint oil to cool your temples.

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  6. What a colourful and nicely scented Qaudrille, Kathy, and I love the ending!

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  7. Love the smell of that peppermint oil and specially the ending:

    he will
    taste like the poetry I
    wish to write

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  8. Kathy, this is just gorgeous, especially the ending, but I love the serenity of the first part of the poem. I think I have peppermint essential oils somewhere--that energizes me.

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