Tuesday, June 20, 2017

Peppermint oil on my temples..




















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dversepoets.com  Quadrille #35


PEPPERMINT OIL ON MY TEMPLES

 ....awakening in
meadow yellow green,
lavender floral notes astound
Time sweetens memories;
my soul, rooted to the ground
Peppermint oil on
my temples
cools my mind;
love is soft, and when he
comes along, he will
taste like the poetry I
wish to write

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14 comments:

  1. Frank HubenyJune 20, 2017 at 6:37 AM

    Very nice!

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  2. Sarah RussellJune 20, 2017 at 6:54 AM

    Wow! A lover who tastes like poetry. Gorgeous!

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  3. lynn__June 20, 2017 at 7:16 AM

    Enticing and fragrant!

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  4. De JacksonJune 20, 2017 at 7:58 AM

    This takes my breath away:
    love is soft, and when he
    comes along, he will
    taste like the poetry I
    wish to write

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  5. CharleyJune 20, 2017 at 8:29 AM

    very well crafted! you showed the emotions most people end up telling; far more effective!

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  6. Maude LynnJune 20, 2017 at 10:39 AM

    This is really lovely!

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  7. Sanaa RizviJune 20, 2017 at 11:53 AM

    "love is soft, and when he comes along, he will taste like the poetry I wish to write"... gorgeous, gorgeous, gorgeous write!!❤️

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  8. brudbergJune 20, 2017 at 12:13 PM

    Oh I would love a taste like that... not strange that you need peppermint oil to cool your temples.

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  9. Kim M. RussellJune 20, 2017 at 12:14 PM


    What a colourful and nicely scented Qaudrille, Kathy, and I love the ending!

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  10. GraceJune 20, 2017 at 5:25 PM

    Love the smell of that peppermint oil and specially the ending:

    he will
    taste like the poetry I
    wish to write

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  11. VictoriaJune 21, 2017 at 12:45 PM

    Kathy, this is just gorgeous, especially the ending, but I love the serenity of the first part of the poem. I think I have peppermint essential oils somewhere--that energizes me.

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  12. Kathy ReedJune 22, 2017 at 6:59 AM

    Thanks, Victoria :-)

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