Tuesday, April 24, 2018

Ebbing tides


































































































At dversepoets today we are writing about family body traits, focusing on a couple of compound adjectives.


Ebbing Tides

The ebbing of the tide and
silken, dark, wet sand
left no trace of him,
or his footprints.
He did not know back then
it wasn't the end
of the line.

They walk just like him,
short legged, yet of fettle form,
sharing his casual gait.
They mimic him,
hand in one pocket,
letting the other
postulate.

Like he did,
his son wears
astute specs on his nose.
There is a tilt, blink,
a nod, salty eyebrows
squint in the sun like his,
a striking familiar pose.

Grandsons have similar
jawlines, smiles, hands
and sophic eyes.             
In certain blue angles
of light, his great-grandson
resembles him,
though taller in size.

I wonder if my father knows
his granddaughters,
a new great-granddaughter,
have such fair bonny faces.
Surely he guides them with
a full, happy heart
on journeys to faraway places.

                 



9 comments:

  1. When I visit your blog, the print is on your image and unreadable. I have to copy and paste to a page and read it. Does anyone else have this trouble visiting here?

    The physical traits are all so cool, but the similar mannerisms are really neat!

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    1. Margaret, I am so sorry. I keep trying to fix this. Thank you for commenting.

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  2. Your poem begins so wistfully, Kathy, with a kind of distant, panoramic view of the sea washing away the footprints, and then it zooms in on the family and the only traces of a grandfather that remain. I love the way you describe the menfolk;s 'fettle form' and casual gait', his typical hand movement, 'astute specs on his nose' and especially the lines:
    '...salty eyebrows
    quint in the sun like his'.

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  3. Love your poem showing that although we are gone we are still here! I liked the line ...
    He did not know back then
    it wasn't the end
    of the line.
    Dwight

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  4. I loved 'salty eyebrows" - a wonderful homage to your fat

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  5. The details in how people move... I really find that so interesting... as if manners are coded and inherited...

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  6. seeing the same smile in grandchildren is very startling and then I feel like dad is watching over us through them, your words really resonated with me.

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