My first attempt at a cinquain, trying it out over at
imaginerygardenwithtoads where there are frequent interesting challenges...the form is catchy, not sure I've got it , but fun trying...
Strict syllable count: 2-4-6-8-2
Strong title (important with such a tight poem)
Strong imagery (perhaps, even, an image per line)
Nature imagery, as in haiku or tanka (though I certainly vary from this!)
Juxtaposition or a clever “turn” at the end
SPRINGTIME
Snow drops
peer from under
sleepy lids with blankets,
tucked in by rich warm soil,
webbed feet skitter across the stage
first act
Gladly
awakening,
cast arrives in order
of appearance in dressing room
Hostas
Garden
colors rotate,
performing now through fall,
playing rolls with no rehearsal
rain shine
Front row
theater seats
from snow drops' wide peephole;
best place to watch the finale
Applause