Friday, October 12, 2012

Englyn poems..



Just above her eyes a black hat resides
  black cat at her side cries
 her straw broom begins to rise
Through the black night suddenly flies

Dark violet ribbons flow from her hair
moonlight on her face not fair
Jack O Lantern doesn't care
Scarecrow with nothing to wear

Ghouls and ghosts haunt the dark street
apples and candy to eat
goblins howl as bat wings beat

Excited children still believe it's true
each Halloween gives the cue
 Great Pumpkin rises anew

by klr
At dVerse Poets Pubdversepoets.com  yesterday we learned 3 forms of the Welsh Englyn poems,
one using 3 rhyming lines of syllables of 7, a set of 4 lines - 10, 6, 7, 8 syllables and one that is made up of 3 lines, 10, 7, 7.  I deviated a bit on the second one...

19 comments:

  1. what you mean its not true...haha how cool to do the season...or halloween with the form...this was fun....and hey a little deviation is not a bad thing right...smiles.

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  2. what a fun poem :) xxo

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  3. The photo and your poem lit up my day -- perfect execution (ooops, another dead image)! :-)
    Seriously, very nice

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  4. You have used the form so well ... loved it !!!

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  5. Oh I so admire a talented poet and you are surly one. I enjoyed this. B

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  6. A very impressive set of poems! Bravo.

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  7. Really a fun piece and picture to go with it. Great job on the form too...

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  8. Well done Katy - muchos likus.

    Anna :o]

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  9. Ha! A lot of fun! I love the image of the witch flying about with her velvet ribbons and her not-fair face! And wonderful the way you mixed up the forms. k.

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  10. I enjoyed these (collectively) and as per. I can't comment on form cos I haven't much clue but I think you have intermingled a few varieties on the form together. This is brilliant and upbeat .. thanks.

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