Sunday, March 10, 2013

Diamante...raining Lego..

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If it's not too presumptuous of me, ( I hope it's O.K.?) I'd like to share what my 
10 year old grandson, Burke, came up with last night while overnight here...after I used some 
of his words for the poetics prompt he told me he had studied haiku and diamante last week at school
and I had read Aprille's poems which are diamantes also, so I told him he could 
choose all the words and we would write it and I would post it...so from 
his mouth to your eyes, ears :  
Bear
awesome cool
riding  running  racing  
 scooter  road  Lego  storm
hit    jumped   dive
blue  sparkling 
                                                    waterfall                                      by Burke B.
Noun
adjective adjective
verb verb verb
noun noun noun noun
verb verb verb
adjective adjective
noun

                                                                                                                          
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16 comments:

  1. Amrit SinhaMarch 10, 2013 at 11:36 PM

    Wow ... this was so well done !!!

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  2. Kathy ReedMarch 11, 2013 at 12:11 AM

    Thank you and I will pass it on to him ;)

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  3. AnonymousMarch 11, 2013 at 12:17 AM

    Very cool bear indeed...great poem!

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  4. Kathy ReedMarch 11, 2013 at 12:40 AM

    Thanks, I'll send him your comment;)

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  5. kelvin s.m.March 11, 2013 at 2:20 AM

    ...very rich river of thoughts... keep it up Burke... great job! smiles...

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  6. rallentandaMarch 11, 2013 at 3:28 AM

    Good for you Burke! Lucky boy to have such a groovy Grandma:)

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  7. Dave KingMarch 11, 2013 at 4:58 AM

    Not presumption at all! Quite the reverse. A cracking verse it would have been, whoever had written it. Thanks for.

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  8. WolfsrosebudMarch 11, 2013 at 6:25 AM

    funny getting the young ones involved.... liked the movement of the piece

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  9. AnonymousMarch 11, 2013 at 11:41 AM

    Lego storm :-)

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  10. MaryMarch 11, 2013 at 5:54 PM

    Get them started young, Katy. Impressive diamante!

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  11. Kathy ReedMarch 11, 2013 at 9:32 PM

    thank you for all the comments...as of a bit ago Burke had not had time yet to read them, had baseball practice and was on his way to bed, but his mother assured me he would read them before he goes to sleep ;) kind of fun to let him see the possibilities.

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  12. ClaudiaMarch 11, 2013 at 9:58 PM

    very cool.. and i love that they have poetry at school already when they're just 10..wow.. i like that...he did well

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    1. Kathy ReedMarch 12, 2013 at 5:33 AM

      Burke and I appreciate your comment very much

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  13. AnonymousMarch 12, 2013 at 3:37 AM

    A very sweet energy here. k.

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