Open link at dversepoets.com tonight where everyone contributes their "slant" on life through their poetry and any topic goes...
Orange rinds strewn
leave a trail to the edge
of the island
of the island
in the sand, forms
herself
herself
into an upright "W"
Reason for his no show,
unknown -
tightly she grips
handfuls of sand,
letting it sift through
tightly she grips
handfuls of sand,
letting it sift through
her fingers over and again
Little consolation
the evening stars,
shooting and landing in the sea
.. it seems,
shooting and landing in the sea
.. it seems,
small distant splashes
gold, grey, salient green
She walks between the large rocks,
anemones reach lazily,
anemones reach lazily,
floating seaweed trips toes,
she stops, listens for his voice,
she stops, listens for his voice,
steps on broken crab leg debris
- plunging into the salty sea
headfirst, submerges herself,
holds her breath
holds her breath
til she can no more,
stokes into the night waves,
now the same color as the wet sand,
she goes to the beach blanket,
table setting for two,
basket of food
basket of food
and wraps a large shawl around
her shoulders
her shoulders
to keep goosebumps, tears
from welling
from welling
Canaries sing their nightfall lullaby,
glass souvenirs ride frothy waves
of whiskey spiked butter cream light
of whiskey spiked butter cream light
The namer of winds had none
for the taut, maple sugary breeze
that now plucked the silvery threads
that now plucked the silvery threads
of a spider's swaying web -
sea and floral scents filter through
palm leaves,
balm for a newly broken heart,
balm for a newly broken heart,
as she falls asleep counting
velvet ribbons
of night sky
velvet ribbons
of night sky
Then morning cries - out loud
the old sun new again, warm
promising, bright
the old sun new again, warm
promising, bright
she knows it's better
to be alone
to be alone
than with someone who
does not tally, hold his own,
want your company
- the tide ebbs, as she does -
island girl - bred by the sea
does not tally, hold his own,
want your company
- the tide ebbs, as she does -
island girl - bred by the sea
Being a beach bum at heart, I love your blog! And the heart shell photo is just beautiful!
ReplyDeleteglad you like it ?
DeleteDelicious with details and nuances. So lovely.
ReplyDeleteshe has a new day...despite the disappointment of last night...of his no show...his loss apparently you know...but i feel her frustration and hurt...the night swim is good, a relief...love hte way you put this section:
ReplyDeleteThe namer of winds had none
for the taut, maple sugary breeze
that now plucked the silvery threads
of a spider's swaying web
thank you ;)
DeleteGreat descriptive quality to this-- as though I was right there with the smell of the sea. Nice~ Jason
ReplyDeleteYes, indeed, sometimes it is better to be alone. You set the scene well & created someone I have empathy with.
ReplyDeleteI am glad that with the new day she realized he was not for her. Beautifully done...you painted a rich scenario with your words.
ReplyDeleteI just kinda fel into this. It didn't jump up and grab me, it just slowly seduced me into wanting to read more, why did you have to end it ;-)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful piece with wonderful imagery, I managed to lose myself there for a minute.
I'm flattered..thank you ;)
DeleteI just fell into this imagery, felt the sand in my pores. And a good resolve at the end to a snarly emotional issue.
ReplyDeleteBrava!
Lady Nyo
I'm in awe of your writing skills...the shell heart is beautiful too!
ReplyDeletethank you..
DeleteGood narrative and the disappointment was keenly felt.
ReplyDeletelovely... the vastness of the world almost drowns the sadness
ReplyDeleteoh i was so sad that he didn't show up but i love the contentment she finds..better alone than with someone who does not tally...true
ReplyDeleteBeautiful. I love the washing away of her expectation in the ocean :)
ReplyDeleteSounds like his loss...she's better off finding out now how unreliable he is...smooth write.
ReplyDeleteI do thank you!
DeleteWow I just love this. The imagery is perfect. So sad that he didn't show up but it's good that she realizes she deserves someone better in the end.
ReplyDeleteKaty, this is luscious in imagery, well done.
ReplyDeletePamela
Thank you!
DeleteOh, so beautifully rendered. You capture that feeling, and the getting over of that feeling well. I love the descriptions of the winds:
ReplyDeleteThe namer of winds had none
for the taut, maple sugary breeze
that now plucked the silvery threads
of a spider's swaying web -
Your descriptions here of the ocean, the beach and all the sounds and sites are wonderful. Enjoyed reading this piece.
ReplyDeleteCanaries sing their nightfall lullaby,
ReplyDeleteglass souvenirs ride frothy waves
of whiskey spiked butter cream light
wow, just wow!
The beach is near and dear to my heart and you have made it live in my memory with your verse. Thank you for painting such powerful imagery with your words and helping me feel at home again.
I'm glad you like it Apryl..thank you..
DeleteI love the old sun becoming the new sun. Gorgeous images.... Sad for her .
ReplyDeleteThank you..
DeleteThis is beautiful
ReplyDeleteThanks Justine..nice to see visit still..it's been two years (?) since we met at Vicki's Umbrellas online class ;)
DeleteYour writing is beautifully descriptive; I have all sorts of images in my head, each one sensuous and lovely. Happy weekend to you.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful - I happily lost myself in her world.
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
Beautiful imagery. You took me there.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Beth..I'm headed your way in the morning to read ;)
ReplyDeletenicely put. :-)
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