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Proper etiquette
I used to pretend
faces shadowed from the light
Future groom of mine
Carriage awaiting
faces shadowed from the light
Future groom of mine
Carriage awaiting
umbras assigned to players
Unidentified
Unidentified
i enjoyed that trip into memories past! lovely haiku!
ReplyDeleteYour image and words are beautiful....Casting an eclipse in silhouettes on the wall Fitting fantasy...my favorite part of it
ReplyDeleteYou incorporated "umbras" into your work quite deliciously!
ReplyDeleteYou've cleverly told a little tale about yourself in these few haiku. Well done!
ReplyDeleteJamie
What fun to read about the silhouettes and coming from Tacoma!! Much more into these than others we see more often. The two you chose for the blog and the haiku to go along with are perfect. Thought provoking haiku. Thank you. Nanc
ReplyDeleteI love the way you weaved the tale. Great haiku writing.
ReplyDeletehi sweetie, delightful poetry and it sounds like a fun exercise. your banana's post has been featured on my facebook page as my favorite photo and story from last blog hop. congrats. xxo
ReplyDeleteRomantic silhouettes and haiku both! Nicely crafted!
ReplyDeleteNice set of silhouette related Haiku ... I had trouble crafting one much less a set. Bravo!
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